Natalie Nicoletti « Thread Started on Jun 2, 2008, 5:41pm »
(Behind) The Scenes;;
Name: Heather Age (optional): 18 Gender: Female Experience: 4 years How'd you find us?: Rothswell University RP Sample:
Jenna grinned at the red plastic cup in her hand. "How you?" She slurred, still grinning like an idiot. A tall male stood in front of her, and grabbed the cup away. "HEY! You took my buddy!
Remembering that always made Jenna get a squirmy feeling in her stomach. How stupid was she? Very stupid. Very, very stupid. She shook her head and pushed the thought away. It wasn't her fault. The red cup was offered to her by… Who was it? She couldn't remember, but the point was, she had took it, and drank it. She knew it was wrong, and she knew what the consequences would be. But she had done it anyway. Thinking about this always made Jenna upset. She wasn't like that. It was her first party. She was young. The whole thing had happened a year ago, but it still stuck in Jenna's mind. And that was the only part she remembered. She had probably done something totally worse.
Wiggling into faded and torn skinnies, Jenna lost her balance. She landed on the floor with a soft 'THUD'. "Ow." She muttered. Standing up, and rubbing her thigh, Jenna hobbled over to her drawers, where she rummaged through a bunch of shirts. Picking one of her favorites, she slipped it on over her head. It was an old white shirt with multiple pairs of sun glasses on it. Pulling on Vans, Jenna practically kicked her self in the face. A soft knock startled her. Her mom walked in, carrying a basket of clean clothes. /"Jenna, love… It looks like your dresser threw up."/ Jenna rolled her eyes, and stood. Grabbing her phone and iPod, she stomped out of her room, down the stairs, and out the door.
Who Are You?;;
Full Name: Natalie Paige Nicoletti Nicknames: None Age/Grade: 16-17: Junior Studying: Photography & Modeling ; Photographic Modeling Sexual Orientation: Straight
Smile Like You Mean It;;
Piercings: Ears Tattoos: None Height: 5'6 Weight: 117 Hair Colour: Honey Blonde Eye Colour: Green Style: Elegant / Stylish PB: Anamaria Mirdita Other: (Birthmarks? Scars?) Small black birthmark on her left but cheek.
Can You Read My Mind?;;
Likes [*] Dancing [*] Singing [*] Modeling [*] Writing [*] Strawberries [*] Piano [*] Swimming [*] Italian Language [*] Rain [*] Love Stories
Dislikes [*] Drugs [*] Arrogance [*] Quiet [*] Being Late [*] Spiders [*] The Dark [*] Dogs [*] Tests [*] Banana's [*] Fake People
Secrets: - knows she's not the prettiest girl in the school, but wont admit it ever. - had a one night stand with one of the boys at school - wants to write her biography someday soon
Other N/A
All These Things That I've Done;;
Mother: Sienna Esta Nicoletti Father: Tony James Nictoletti Siblings: Mia Maria Nicoletti Other: Grandfather Pets: Snake named Lyra Heritage: Italian Hometown: Rome, Italy
History: Natalie was born June 18th in Rome,Italy. Her parents were so proud of their gorgeous daughter and raised her with strong Italian traditions and beliefs. As soon as she could walk and talk Natalie was singing and dancing but her favorite thing would happen to be photographed, At the age of 2 her parents had entered her in modeling competitions she won some and lost some. Natalie had lived a wonderful life up until the age of 14, Her parents had split up because of the fact that her father was hardly home, Sienna was sick of the life that Tony was living and had reminded him numerous times that he was not a child anymore.
Natalie was so upset about the split that she lost her desire to be in front of a camera and locked herself inside her bedroom for months, little be known that while Natalie was in her bedroom she had picked up a knack for the piano and practiced day and night until she had felt successful! When Natalie was 16 her mother and sister passed in a tragic car accident leaving Natalie all alone to defend herself, with no way at all to contact her father Natalie picked up a job dancing at one of the local strip joints, not a job she would be proud of but it kept a good income which supplied her with a home to live in.
Although she was working their illegally no one ever asked her how old she was or anything serious like that. She knew one day she wouldn't be working at the strip club, Natalie had dreams of becoming a model once again. The Davenport Academy was one of the top schools in which Natalie was saving up for, she was having a hard time applying though because every time she picked up the Application she had thoughts of people at the school finding out about her exotic dancing career and laughing at her. Natalie had no confidence what so ever in herself as of now. Finally after years of searching Natalie finally gained contact with her father once again, he payed to have her fly down to Haines City Florida as soon as he had heard about the accident. While Natalie was in Florida, she and her father discussed schools in which she would attend so that she could finish school. Natalie was not impressed with her father pushing that she become a lawyer like he was, he was completely blinded to the fact that she wanted to become a model.
After months of arguing and yelling Natalie's father had finally accepted the fact that his daughter had no interest in becoming a lawyer like he was and helped her fill out the application to Davenport Academy [462 words]
Re: Natalie Nicoletti « Reply #1 on Jun 2, 2008, 6:47pm »
Honestly, all looks good to me, except for the fact that you need the Codeword at the bottom. If you read the rules, you know that. I dunno if Kate has been enforcing that rule or what, but I thought I'd just let you know.
Also, I like to let Kate make the final decision on the applications, so we'll wait for her say in this. Overall, I'd say good job.